The Locked Maze: Page 16

This is probably easiest to read in my deviantArt Gallery.

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I wasn't too happy with the last two panels, so I decided to print the whole thing out so I could get a better sense of the story in its entirity... *sigh* Some of these just didn't work out so well: poor timing, serious consistency errors, deviations from the character comps - ack!

So I ended up fixing one of the continuity issues in the last two panels, but I am just going to force myself to live with the others (since one of them CAN'T be changed w/o redoing the entire panel). I guess it can be a game for the readers - find the stupid mistakes!

In this panel I pulled out the character sheets and spent a lot more time on storyboarding and drawing. And I like it a lot more. Still some errors and last-minute fixes, but overall it is nice. I hope I can pull of the next splash page as well. :)