This is probably easiest to read in my facebook collection.

I think I was a little too enamoured of the four-panel conversation row, at the exclusion of other ways I might have approached this page. The Significant Other said it looked like a scene from That 70s Show. :/ In Book I, each page was just a grouping of various "screenshots" with the occasional effort at placing important moments at the end of a page. In Book II, I tend to approach each page with an idea, and force the action to fit it. Which is why I've had so many unattractively text-heavy pages. The whole decision making process here is so much harder than it looks from the finished product. It's actually a lot like programming. There's a lot of arbitrary choices going on which we drape with pretty phrases like "most efficient" and "elegant" and "modern coding conventions," but in reality we just picked one of ten nearly identical ways of solving the problem and - although we will spend the next 20 years re-evaluating that choice in our heads - it's written down and we aren't going to bother changing it now.